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2018.11.30

順天堂(医)の自由英作文2018年度入試<答案例1>

順天堂大学医学部の2018年度入試で出題されたテーマ
「ソーシャルテクノロジーは我々をつなぐか分断するか」の答案例その1です!!
医学部受験者でなくても、社会系テーマとして非常に興味深いテーマですので自由英作文が必要な受験者はぜひ参考にしてください!

 

 

。。。ここからはほぼ英文テキストしか出てきません。。。

Nowadays many people get information through their smartphones or PCs. They don’t only receive information but also post their unique information and not a few people earn by offering interesting movies on the sites. Readers can leave their impressions or comments onthe sites, where they can read and write freely, sympathize with or object to others.
When we lived in the time communication on the web was not active, we had no places to freely and swiftly express our own opinions. We had no means to know how others felt or what opinions they had toward some news.
However, due to social technology, it has become incredibly easy to express our own feelings and know about others’ feelings.
☆ When a famous person says something, suprisingly many ordinary people can agree or disagree instantly about what the person said. Sometimes people can express their negative feelings on the web so repeatedly and fiercely that the famous person will have to apologize. Some people can use violent phrases, but many more can express their own feelings on the web. Certainly people can feel that they are actually related positevely to others on the web. ☆
※ When we are thinking of where to buy a new product, before going to the shops we can read and examine closely the reviews written on the web by those who have purchased that new product. The more expensive a product is, the more carefully we read the various reviews. Of course the reviews are based on others’ subjective opinions but we can study a lot about a product. In this way we can share others’ opinions and have others as supporters on the web. ※
We feel secured to know that there are many people whose opinions we can agree with. The fact that on the web there are those who have opinions similar to our really reinforces the current situation in which social technology can make us close to each other so that we can avoid feeling isolated.

このままだと300語オーバーです。
☆のセクションと※のセクション、具体的な例の陳述はどちらか一つでよいでしょう。

 

 

 

 

 

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